The fire in me

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    The fire in me

    The fire in me is a blazing fire
    Its fire burns like a furnance
    All the oceans put together cannot quench my fire
    The rivers try to flood my fire with intense gravity
    Despite all efforts, my fire keeps burning
    The fire in me is unstoppable and untouchable
    No matter how hard the ocean tries to stop my fire
    it fails because it is unquenchable
    The fire in me is instigated by many factors
    Passion, desire and love are products of my fire
    The greatest of them all .......is YOU

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    MOMofTWINS commented on The fire in me

    07-02-2009

    What a beautiful poem you have here! Sensually written with a dash of steamy passion. Wonderfully crafted piece!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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