The First Moon of Elatia

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    The First Moon of Elatia

    ‘twas the first moon of elatia

    before dolore lost her bearing

    It wasn’t that her road had turned

    it’s just that she stopped caring

     

    her burdening darkened overload

    vanished in bright haze

    no more, some painful tale of woe

    just blurry halcyon days

     

    Bayer, Squibb and Eli Lilly

    once courted her with verve

    and so also would have Pfizer

    but he had lost his nerve.

     

    the dawning of elatia came

    with sudden threat to all

    for once unburdened by distress

    they had no cause to call.

     

    viagara slid, zoloft collapsed

    ephedra scant maintained

    starbucks soon tried out topless 

    but baristas weren’t retained.

     

    for no one needed uppers

    no one, some capsuled crutch

    as dolore fell aswoon in love

    with elatia’s healing touch.

     

    twas the first moon of elatia

    as this age made final swoon

    when we all survived its blood red morn

    before her sun arose at noon.


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    lunamarie commented on The First Moon of Elatia

    01-17-2011

    hmmmm ... very interesting ... giggle ... nice fantasy! ... Congrats! ............**Luna

    HarverTomsson

    01/17/2011

    I'm thrilled so many people liked this one. I liked your Goldie Hawn giggle in the middle. Harv

    ApaqRasgirl commented on The First Moon of Elatia

    12-25-2010

    that was absolutly fabulous my friend......wonderful poem I loved it and a well deserved congrats on winning the contest.....this one is a true masterpiece and so deserves to be printed in the poetry book and many others as soon as they discover it........adding this to my favs.........FANTASTIC DARLING...........love asha......and see you at the publishers....Merry Christmas

    HarverTomsson

    12/26/2010

    You are s-o-o sweet, Thank you. Harv

    HIP13044b commented on The First Moon of Elatia

    12-18-2010

    This is like the NASCAR of poetry with all the advertising lol!! I found this to be quite an enjoyable read, and congrats on the win.

    HarverTomsson

    12/18/2010

    Yeah, but I don't think the advertisers would like what I did to their car! Hah Harv

    Tempestlady commented on The First Moon of Elatia

    12-15-2010

    From a nursing standpoint, I can really relate and read between the lines. Well done my friend, well done. Happens all too often i am afraid. Write on, and Happy holidays......

    HarverTomsson

    12/15/2010

    Thank you, and my best to you and yours this celebration season. Harv

    Doshima commented on The First Moon of Elatia

    12-15-2010

    The first moon of elatia will continue to shine. Nice read. My congratulations.

    HarverTomsson

    12/15/2010

    Thank you so much, Harv

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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