The Fool

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  • hcrellers
  • February 5th, Friday morning, purple dawn... A moment like a poem, you wish you could hold it... I shut my eyes like it's frozen... it's gone when I open...

The Fool

deeper than i thought was possible
this love has surrounded me
it steals all of my thoughts
its the scab i pick at till it bleeds
i could never imagined
that what was is this
i still have so much of you inside
it sickens me
my days are filled with dreams of you
i feel the warmth in my soul
and the abyss where my heart was
the heart you stole
like a crook in the night
what was a trade
became a forfeit
have you done this before
a serial lover
your love is the drug i can't quit
the high incredible bliss
the withdrawals tear my soul to shreds
i think to myself
who are you?
why do i let you do this to me?
i see your face in my mind...
my heart calls for you.
i'm blinded...
i'm a fool.


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Charlie23 commented on The Fool

02-01-2010

This is awesome, I love your wording throughout this poem. I only cringed at one line, and it nothing to do with your writing, but rather the image you placed in mind. I take that back, that has everything to do with your writing, it says you can paint a vivid picture. Great poem!

hcrellers

02/01/2010

thank you again for another lovely compliment. :)

lithiumblack commented on The Fool

01-27-2010

Love is sociopathic, in its' way. It brings us to our knees in waves of indescribable passion, while silently creeping up behind us, waiting patiently to drive the proverbial blade in deep and slow. You've captured that perfectly in this piece. Another outstanding poem.

hcrellers

01/27/2010

how true are your words. thank you again.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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