The Genesis Flood: Part Two

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The Genesis Flood: Part Two

Gen 7:1-24

 

In year six hundred of Noah’s life

God told him to enter with sons and wife

Know that each son was married as well

With rejoicing companion before the rains fell

 

Of the clean beasts, by seven, would come inside

Of the unclean by two, and of seven who fly

For in seven days hence, rain would commence

And wicked, prone Godless would know their pretense

 

There Noah now waited with sons and their wives

Dreading the knowledge of the unsaved lives

Who clawed at the closed door of the ark

As the heavens opened to rain in the dark

 

Warnings they had for one hundred years

In pleading and earnest, through sweat and tears

In hopes to prevent the worst of fears

Scarring Noah’s memory: laughter and jeers

 

The fountains of the deep were opened below

And heavens on high released from windows

Torrents of water and flooding foretold

Drowning the fate of the weak and the bold

 

The windows broken, above, now clear

Was the crystalline dome of atmosphere

That guarded all skin from harmful rays

Degenerating health and length of days

 

So came the rain forty days and nights

To purge earth from all wickedness’ blight

So wept the last family living on earth

Who knew in grace that God measured worth

 

With increasing water the ark would soon float

Rise off the earth as the world storm smote

For ending dynasties and powers’ machinations

Was an end and beginning of God’s creation

 

Residing within this vessel of great volume

Voyaged the first last family o’er earthen gloom

For the deep fountains in ocean floors raged

Met with broken skies, blocked sun forty days

 

Colossal gathering of water’s grand

Raised vast oceans, consuming dry land

Siphoning breath of all living creatures

Resculpting the earth’s geologic features

 

(The ark’s proportions are true by design

Naval engineers model after its kind

The volume of cargo, ample by far

Equaled eight hundred thirty eight rail cars)

 

Bittersweet this retreat, haven from wrath

Did Noah cry, grieving, to change wicked’s path?

Through tempest dark and water’s fury

His visions screamed in eyes blurry

 

Noah was obedient to follow in quest

And walked with his God, who knew him best

To guide him through such arduous test

By giving him heritage in deliverance to rest

 

The waters of flood rose over mountains

Fed from the sky and under sea fountains

And the breath of all life was now negated

One hundred fifty days, before waters abated

 

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Whiskers commented on The Genesis Flood: Part Two

01-23-2011

Ahh, must continue on to part 3. Can't stop now...

Marsink

01/23/2011

...If you must! thanks for indulging in this recreation on Creation!

knight4696 commented on The Genesis Flood: Part Two

04-04-2010

Again Marsink you are amazing! Though shorter than the 1st - it really firts perfectly - I feel like I'm watching an Epic Movie and you my friend are one heck of a director! :) Ken

Marsink

04/05/2010

Thae movies have been made and I am glad you feel that this captured the thrust of the scripture! I appreciate your time and energy to read and compliment so finely as you have, thanks, Ken!

mdpoetgirl commented on The Genesis Flood: Part Two

04-03-2010

Somehow this one seemed shorter, mars... and lighter. Great job!

Marsink

04/03/2010

This part weighs less because the ark was docked on dry land, and now, with the rains and water flooding to raise it in the water, the displacement by volume creates less bearing weight on the hull. lol I do appreciate your time to read and comment!

NevillePark commented on The Genesis Flood: Part Two

03-27-2010

A master locksmith I said to myself.With a nimble twist of a word string he unlocks thoughts locked away in the dry memory of the ancients as easy as unrolling a carpet.. You are in the zone. Unquestionably.. Lovely work!

Marsink

03/28/2010

Thanks Neville, I have seen your comments on some of our common friends! I am glad to have your audience first hand. A very gracious estimate of my presentation!

Springsize commented on The Genesis Flood: Part Two

03-27-2010

How wonderful to find this 2nd presentation of the Bible's mirror, in poetic concern for fellow human. And I also note so closely how your heart leaps to the plights of others, wanting to be a beacon flashlight, you bring a tractor trailor filled with gems from your life experiences, with religious direction.... and your love of the old stories of goodness versus evil is showing in this section of the Noah story. Now, I... as a novice scientist and doubting thomas, look for the evidence that this Noah story existed... and I think I read somewhere in your comments that there are new discoveries regarding this rather large floating 'ship' ? I am also aware that science has identified the period of time associated with the Noah story to the risings and sinkings of our Earth's continents... looking at the lines along the Grand Canyon, I see where the water Once was,... the globe of the Earth even, it is obvious the land was a one slab that has broken into many slabs of land, looking like a puzzle and all the pieces fit. I am so looking forward to reading your next installment of this Noah story.

Marsink

03/28/2010

I could easily fill this page top to bottom with science in the Bible. But that is not my immediate focus, though could be indulged with other projects. I tried to answer the reasoning of the long life spans chronicled in the first 6 chapters of Genesis, as well as the design and the proportions of the ark. This was a work of excitement and some small anxiety to wait until my writing was in sync with the text I wanted to expose. The age- old struggle of people and their inherant sin nature is always relevant to those who understand that we are but dust in search of our Maker and His prupose for us. I am thankful for your well informed commentaries of all who you read, and in this case, for your compliments on this work! Part three should be posted soon.

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