The Gental Vampire speaks

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    • DarkChi
    • Come look at the scares smother the heart opening up no more

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    it's a vampire talking to a scared lil child he saved

    The Gental Vampire speaks

    Fear me not young one
    Though I hold this sword and killed that monster
    You need not fear me,
    I was simply trying to save you
    You are young with so much life left to live
    Come I will help you
    You need not be afraid of me
    I am a gentalman
    Simply take my hand
    We will leave here
    I will show you to safety
    You can trust me
    Though I have fangs like that creacher
    I am nothing like him
    I'm pure
    Yes that's right
    Here let's go from this place
    You must be cold
    Yes I know the perfict place for you
    A friend of mine always wanted a child
    Come

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    Rhymer commented on The Gental Vampire speaks

    12-01-2010

    A vampire hero, unique twist to this age old demon. 10 from me.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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