The Good Times

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    The Good Times

    On a hot sunny day,
    When all the kids come
    out and play

    Any plans of what to do
    Another glorious day
    through and through

    No signs of murder,
    robbery or despair

    People laughing, and
    shooting the breeze

    Just kicking back, relaxing,
    and chilling with ease

    Not a police car in sight
    For the day was only to
    infinite and bright

    The good times keep on
    rolling and rolling

    The good times...

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    Nebiyah71 commented on The Good Times

    02-17-2009

    Thank you for the sunshine. Poem has good flow and continuity. It has good imagery I can feel/see you smiling as I read it. I'm glad you had this experience. Hey come to Open mic at the Apache Cafe on 64th and 3rd in Atlanta. Check it out online for more details.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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