The Greatest

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    The Greatest

    Isn't he the greatest?
    Don't you just love how he makes you feel?
    The way he sways your body
    when you're dancing in the moonlight?

    Isn't he the greatest?
    Don't you just love how he surprises you?
    The way he spontaneously takes you
    by the hand and says, "Close your eyes"?

    Isn't he the greatest?
    Don't you just love how he makes you laugh?
    The way he tickles your neck
    when you're taking your nap?

    Isn't he the greatest?
    Don't you just love how he says, "I LOVE YOU"?
    The way he looks into your eyes,
    and kisses your lips as you fall deep into his?

    WOW!!!
    YES, he is the greatest!
    I just love how he is.
    They way he loves me into the night,
    and through and through the day.
    YES, he is the greatest!

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    slimgoodwoody commented on The Greatest

    01-24-2011

    Good feelings, better poem! Great write I really enjoy the feel good mood of this poem!
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    angelchaser commented on The Greatest

    08-30-2010

    This is a very nice poem, I like reading something uplifting now and then, this was a nice find. Well done again.
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    butterfly62463 commented on The Greatest

    02-14-2009

    Excellent
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    butterfly62463 commented on The Greatest

    02-14-2009

    I know what you mean.Keep up the good work in your poems.
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    butterfly62463 commented on The Greatest

    02-14-2009

    I know what you mean.Keep up the good work in your poems.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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    A "Once Had" 7 01/20/2009
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