The Invisible Threat

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The Invisible Threat

I apoligize and hang my head
To the many insults that were never actually said
By an imaginary girl who I most fear,
The girl who lies inside my mirror.

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BikemanRJ commented on The Invisible Threat

03-04-2010

But within the words of this poem a very forgiving and caring person is revealed since the insults are never made. Great Poem Bikeman

scrambledeggs5

03/07/2010

Thank you!

MindNumbing commented on The Invisible Threat

02-26-2010

For a poem with only a few words, this says so much. You've done a beautiful job here!

scrambledeggs5

02/26/2010

Why thank you so much!

MrJTerra commented on The Invisible Threat

02-26-2010

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scrambledeggs5

04/22/2010

shut up

TCpoeboy commented on The Invisible Threat

02-25-2010

very compelling to consider ones self as an imaginary being. yet to use the concept of your reflection being derived from light as the letent image that goes away when U move from the mirror. Great write!

scrambledeggs5

02/26/2010

Thank you. That was the image I was trying to portray. I was also trying to show how much it hurts to look in the mirror because of my low self esteem but I'm couldn't really figure out how to do that so this is the best I could come up with. :)

papapaczki commented on The Invisible Threat

02-25-2010

I like the reference to the girl who lies inside the mirror. Very nicely written for such a short poem. Seems to have a lot of meaning inside it.

scrambledeggs5

02/26/2010

Thank you. I thought so, too.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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