the key

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    the key

    Why do you lock me up
    With no means of escape
    No key to the lock
    This maze is way too long
    Too confusing (up and down)
    Looking everywhere for a route
    Going crazy, maybe insane
    Don’t know why, just that way
    No light to guide the way
    If I find a way out
    Will you let me go
    Will you let me choose
    The path that I want
    Or will you lock me up again

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    Charlie23 commented on the key

    06-09-2010

    Like the idea you worked with here! It can suck when someone else holds the only key...

    BringMeBullets commented on the key

    03-08-2010

    Don't we all just want to do what we want? I wish we could. But sometimes life isn't that simple... A great write. Shows a lot of emotion and colorful images in the mind. Thank you for sharing.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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