The Kill

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i lyke iit i put mehh emotiions intuhh this poem 
tell mehh whtt yuhh think about it!

The Kill

The kill is that you're gone 
The kill is that I need you
The kill is me angry;nd sad
All the emotions of pain; 
I am fearless with you;but careless without you
My heart feels like a black hole of darkness
Tears fall from my eyes like heavy rain 
The kill is that you are gone  
The kill is that I need you
The kill is that I'm cryinq
But the thing that is most important is that... 
I love you!

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cmlestrade commented on The Kill

08-31-2009

This is excellent, a very emotional piece with a consistent repetitive rhythm. nice work keep them coming

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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