The Land Before Time

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    The Land Before Time

    I pay tribute to the land before time,
    Stand in awe of the most ancient,
    To the kings of old she holds in her bosom,
    The echoing sounds of civilizations past,
    Relics of masters their works lie unmatched,
    That taught the whole world mathematics and art,
    Of mysticism and magic and poetry is fact,

    I pay tribute to the dark goddess,
    From her womb birthed the cradle of life,
    And all of creation marveled at the sight,
    The birth of a being in the image of its maker,
    A powerful avatar, a symbol of light,

    I shed a tear for the land before time,
    Ravaged and robbed, her power absolved,
    Her children abhorred, the kin of a lesser god,
    Divided and scattered, their very lives sold,

    I sing a song of the land before time,
    Her spirit relenting despite her grim past,
    A beauty reborn no longer outcast,
    Though still oppressed she still holds fast,
    Her arid cracked soil and dusty brown crust,
    A story of hope, and hope we must,
    That the world respects the land before time,
    For better or worse the task will be mine,

    Edwin Nderu Kamau



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    jademelissa74 commented on The Land Before Time

    07-14-2009

    "A story of hope, and hope we must, That the world respects the land before time, For better or worse the task will be mine," Edwin, what a wonderful, soothing piece! You have really managed to reel in the reader from the first line and hypnotize he/she for the remainder of the piece. Awesome Job!

    daydreamer23

    07/15/2009

    thanks erica im really glad you liked it

    SuSpence commented on The Land Before Time

    07-13-2009

    Another wonderful write daydreamer. This is the 3rd poem of yours I have read, and I now feel very honored and flattered that you liked my work as much as you did because after reading the quality of your work and seeing the height of your talent it really does mean a lot coming from you my friend. -Spence

    daydreamer23

    07/15/2009

    thank you for reading it means alot that you enjoyed it, much appreciated

    Hampton commented on The Land Before Time

    07-13-2009

    A poem that should evolve to be a classic. Edwin you shine in this poem and I can't say enough about your poetic talent.

    daydreamer23

    07/13/2009

    thank you very much for reading and im happy you enjoyed it.

    kmeadows commented on The Land Before Time

    06-23-2009

    How wonderful, this is just a beautiful poem! I actually cant comment to much because it totally overwhelmed me. You have an awesome gift!

    daydreamer23

    07/08/2009

    thank you so much for reading and im glad you enjoyed it,bless.

    AmadeusEx commented on The Land Before Time

    06-22-2009

    i love this because i want this again....the world you speak of will come around and im sure we wont be there to see it but it will be wonderful when it happens, great poem

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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