"The last Episodes of a Vintage slave"

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"The last Episodes of a Vintage slave"

"The last Episodes of a Vintage slave"

I'm shattered beyond belief, reaching for, an elusive life
that will never consume me, broken with with splitters in my  intelligence
I do die, with slow disadvantages, chocking on harsh reflections 
that keeps me on a death watch, waiting for the agent of  loaded madness...
to execute me in thee (the) open, in incubus style
with hands bound to hell's bedroom of featured view...     
now manipulation is but a...
Hypnosis-Inducing Drug away (sodium barbiturate) to filling your boss's   
pockets with gold...
you gave a lifetime of scheming performances of which I mostly
saw in the nude...
so when the lights dim from my eyes, will you watch... 
and when its your turn and your torch is extinguished
know i will wait for you, in hell...
and i will be ready to sever you all the pain you deserved,,,     

aka:lyricvixen

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DeepEclipse commented on "The last Episodes of a Vintage slave"

05-27-2010

Damn. It slams its fist on the table. Those first four lines [I'm shattered beyond belief, reaching for, an elusive life that will never consume me, broken with with splitters in my intelligence I do die, with slow disadvantages, chocking on harsh reflections that keeps me on a death watch, waiting for the agent of loaded madness...] - sets the pace and its an eruption of metaphor and meaning after that. Beautiful.

poetheart87 commented on "The last Episodes of a Vintage slave"

05-27-2010

Wow, you left me utterly breathless. There's a deeper meaning to this write. The pain is so raw, it leaves the writer's mind cut and open. Keep on writng.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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lyricvixen’s Poems (78)

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Now Watch Me Walk 0
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The lullaby Of Old Rattling Bones 0
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Well Here's to the Bride 0
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Fin My Next Life 1
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To Farm A Sea Two 0
Transparency, Public Records 0
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Lady Vitamin B and The Oil of Murder 1
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Saucy Applesauce Buns 0
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So How Come 2
Good Bi Rain 1
So, You Think 1
Pus On My Soul 0
"Happy Happy Birthday Miss Pamela Williams Owsley" 0
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TARZAN 1
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Snap, Crackle, Pop 1
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Dreams of A Second-class Citizen 0
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Colorless, Sweet-Smellin
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