My Last Everything

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  • Mandi
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this is dedicated to someone special, he knows who he is

My Last Everything

What might I do on my last day?
I shall wile away the time with you.
How might I spend my last hours?
I shall spend the hours proving my love is true.

How might I spend my last morning?
I shall intertwine your fingers in mine.
How might I spend my last evening?
With your head on the pillow next to mine.

What might I write in my last poem?
I shall write words of my love for you.
What might I dream of in my last dream?
I shall dream of you and only you.

How might I take my last breath?
Will you hold me in your arms close to you.?
What might I say with my last breath?
I shall close my eyes and whisper,"I love you."

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winterkou commented on My Last Everything

08-31-2010

Love is such a great emotion, and being loved is such a great feeling . I love this poem. Great job. This gets a 10.

ApaqRasgirl commented on My Last Everything

07-29-2010

sorry it took me so long to read your poem.......this is truly sweet, a wonderful piece of true love, the kind of love that you would not hesitate to spend your last moments in......great poem dear mandi I loved it.....thanks for asking me to enjoy your work love asha

Mandi

07/30/2010

thank you for responding... I knew you would. Please read some of my other works whenever you can, as I value your opinion

dumdumdj commented on My Last Everything

05-23-2010

Love this one greatly....makes me sit back and think about the love in my life right now and it were that time to say goodbye...how would answer the topics you write about....love it!!!

MalikPeterson commented on My Last Everything

05-16-2010

You have picked a topic here that has been pondered many times. If you knew it was your last day on earth...how would you spend it. I think you have chosen a very favorable end of days...and the sentiment of it all is very gentle...no remorse or pain...only happiness to the end :)

Mandi

05/17/2010

thank you for thinking of me Malik

passionflower commented on My Last Everything

04-08-2010

My favorite kind of poetry LOVE. Where would we be without it?

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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