The Legend Of The Great White Wolf Part 2

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    This is a continuation of my first poem "Legend Of The Great White Wolf". I am hoping to transform this into a childrens book.

    The Legend Of The Great White Wolf Part 2

    Upon awakening
    The following morn
    The indian girl
    Had survived the storm

    Together they walked
    Through deepening snow
    As the artic winds
    Continued to blow

    Hidden high in the trees
    And out of sight
    A panther watched
    Just waiting to strike

    With a frightening roar
    The big cat leaped
    Knocking the child
    Off of her feet

    With anger and fury
    The wolf did attacked
    Sinking his teeth
    Into the big cats back

    They fought and they snarled
    Before the cat fled
    The wolf lay there wounded
    Or possibly dead

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    REGINA2 commented on The Legend Of The Great White Wolf Part 2

    10-25-2010

    Wolves are amazing creatures. Like dogs, sometimes man's best friend.

    Teardrops commented on The Legend Of The Great White Wolf Part 2

    03-10-2010

    Beautiful and so true the wolf has great wisdom and is brave according to indian law . I am part native american great poem my friend Marie

    lonewolf

    03/10/2010

    Thanks for the wonder comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I also am part native american. Cherokee blood

    blackfootlady commented on The Legend Of The Great White Wolf Part 2

    03-10-2010

    Wolf I like indian stuff,this was pretty good,Ty for sharing it with me.In my pictures on my profile my husband made an indian knife if you would like to see one.He is canadian indian.

    lonewolf

    03/10/2010

    Thanks for your comment. Ive always been fascinated by indians and never understood why until this past summer. I found out that I am 1/4 Cherokee.

    summerrose35 commented on The Legend Of The Great White Wolf Part 2

    03-02-2010

    the wolf cant die! this is great lone.she needs to nurse him back to health.that would make a really good childrens book.

    Kaylimazza commented on The Legend Of The Great White Wolf Part 2

    02-27-2010

    Oh wow great poem this gave me great imagryi could see it. it was awesome good job!

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