The life


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My inspiration was my loving boyfriend Jeremiah, who is always here for me when I need him.

The life

Long lazy kisses underneath the whispering willows,

On a feathery soft blanket, I lay my head on a pillow.

You cover my body with your own,

As we explore secret places unknown.

I stand before you, your blushing bride,

In a pearl white dress, and radiating pride.

You lift my veil for a kiss,

The secrets it holds, tells of wedded bliss.

On a hospital bed, with family around,

Our baby is born, and joy abounds.

Swaddled in a blanket of pink, with eyes as blue as any ocean

I look at her father, eyes so full of emotion

You give away your daughter,

To the man, who will love her.

As she stands at the altar,

You know her love will never falter.

We sit and watch the sun set, our hair thin and gray

We know what some people will say, That our lives were cliche

We sit, and retell our story,

And know we have reached our final glory.

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

Alexia’s Poems (33)

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A life 0
Thoughts 0
The life 0
One fine day in May 0
Loss 1
You're Really Not 0
Faerie Garden 0
My world 2
A World of Their Own 3
Heaven 1
My walk of solitude 3
Day Dream 1
Rain 2
Daddy's little girl 7
The Spark 2
My fairytale 3
All I want 2
Our Little Gift 1
My Dark Night 3
Forever Yearning 2
Strong and True 4
Snow Fall 3
My Prince 4
Wilted Love 2
The Dance 3
My Best Friend 5
I didn't know 2
Betrayal 6
Unrequited Love 3
Oceanic Memories 1
Two Lovers 4
Mother and Baby 1
Baby Sleeps 2