The Look of Love

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    Poem Commentary

    True love will look at you and not hide...

    The Look of Love


    Emotions will always run too deep
    and tears may fall from my face
    But the truth is worth the struggle
    Wrapping your heart in a warm embrace

    Then time and time again
    without notice or restrain
    Confusion and frustration
    takes over the loving game

    It's a chance you have to take
    It's chalanges to face
    You'll walk into the trials
    And pain will take it's place

    As well the beauty of loves desire
    Encompassing each passing night
    Passion fills my body
    Embracing you oh so right

    I'm not afraid of losing love
    I won't run from fates embrace
    But it will have to capture me
    And look me in the face


    Swan


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    alb29oclfl commented on The Look of Love

    08-04-2010

    A simply beautiful expression of the desire we all have, and all to often are afraid to reach out for, or allow to reach us, and yes look me in the face.

    purpleswan

    08/04/2010

    Thank you for your comments. For me the desire was there but the person was distant and you can't build on distance, you have to look one in the face................thank you.............Swan

    sunshine33710 commented on The Look of Love

    07-27-2010

    That is a very pretty poem! Very well written. I also like the lines Emotions will always run too deep and tears may fall from my face. I have alot of emotions and i get upset sometimes.

    purpleswan

    07/27/2010

    Thank you sunshine. I wish you peace....Swan

    gogant commented on The Look of Love

    07-02-2010

    Your line, "Passion fills my body" could be a footnote for this lovely poem, Swan.................................truly............................gogant

    purpleswan

    07/07/2010

    Thank you so much, gogant, I feel very deeply and try hard to express that. I'm glad the passion comes through.........Swan

    ginga commented on The Look of Love

    07-02-2010

    purpleswan, A poem that floats along with acceptance and hope that love has to be tried more than once and not given up on. I love your sentiments. ginga

    dahlusion commented on The Look of Love

    07-02-2010

    A wonderful poem: "As well the beauty of loves desire Encompassing each passing night Passion fills my body Embracing you oh so right"—very sexy!

    purpleswan

    07/07/2010

    Once again, I am honored by your comments Dah. I put all I am into what I write. It is my comfort and my release. It all has to vent somewhere.............Thank you so very sweetly................Swan

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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