The Love Bug

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I wrote this soon after I got my first Boyfriend. For about a week I couldn't think of anything but him (now my ex-bf).

The Love Bug

I have this little bug crawling
Now all I'm doing is calling
"I'M SICK, I'M SICK!"
It's that little tick
Called the love bug
It moves like a slug
Moving through me day and night
I've got the love bug bite
My mind is blank of all but you
Little bug, SHOO!!
Now i'm in a nice little slack
Because of this love bug attack
My friend said "You've fallen in L-O-V-E"
HELP ME!!
Man that little bug
That hide under my rug
Now off comes the glove
I don't wanna be in love

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charmlessman2d commented on The Love Bug

03-18-2010

haha..i actually clicked on this because of the jonas brothers song. i scrollled down to discover thats where you got it from! nice. love the rhyme scheme of YOU and SHOO. goodjob! its like the sunny side of a new love lost. you make the pain sound so innocent. like if someone from a cartoon just lost a boyfriend. i don't mean that in a bad way. i actually really like this.

wasteofpaint commented on The Love Bug

07-28-2009

i loved the simplicity of the ryhmes and the childlike sense to it :] good job

scrye commented on The Love Bug

07-27-2009

I loved this little sing song poem. Funny and so happy go lucky love. Life and love is an experience we haven't alot of control over though, so enjoy. Loved it a 10 from me.

jj1562

07/27/2009

I actually got the name 4 the poem while hearing the song Love Bug by the Jonus Brothers

Wakeitha commented on The Love Bug

07-26-2009

Funny my friend, we all go do this period in our lives. I like your poem keep writting and be careful. May God be with you out your teenage year.

jj1562

07/27/2009

Thanks, I read this for a creative talents performance. It got tons of laughs.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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