The Love I Felt For You

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    • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

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    ♥ Sean Luke Peterson ♥

    The Love I Felt For You

    The first time our eyes met
          I felt may face get red
    I knew I lost control though
          not a word was said

    Chills ran up and down my spine
          I felt my knees go weak.
    My palms got wet, My mouth went dry     
          And I could hardly speak

     Looking at you on my phone
          Those feelings all return
     I knew i loved you with a passion
          For the flames within still burn

     I miss you constantly
          and i always speak your name
    No matter where you are
          my feelings are still the same

    So no matter what-my love
          i will be with you
    Forever and ever, in my life
          and for all eternity, true

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    killingP13 commented on The Love I Felt For You

    02-12-2011

    ...hmm i wonder why love seems so perfect and sweet but deep inside its just pure pain and torture for the soul :( ..or maybe its just me lol
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    VampireGirl666

    02/12/2011

    No its not just you lol. its something we apprently cant live without but we rarely have it

    angelchaser commented on The Love I Felt For You

    11-08-2010

    This is beautiful, a poem I would be proud to call my own, though I don't think I would have written it as well as you have. Great poem, the first of yours I've read. 10 from me.
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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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