The Love I Felt For You

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  • VampireGirl666
  • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

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♥ Sean Luke Peterson ♥

The Love I Felt For You

The first time our eyes met
      I felt may face get red
I knew I lost control though
      not a word was said

Chills ran up and down my spine
      I felt my knees go weak.
My palms got wet, My mouth went dry     
      And I could hardly speak

 Looking at you on my phone
      Those feelings all return
 I knew i loved you with a passion
      For the flames within still burn

 I miss you constantly
      and i always speak your name
No matter where you are
      my feelings are still the same

So no matter what-my love
      i will be with you
Forever and ever, in my life
      and for all eternity, true

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killingP13 commented on The Love I Felt For You

02-12-2011

...hmm i wonder why love seems so perfect and sweet but deep inside its just pure pain and torture for the soul :( ..or maybe its just me lol

VampireGirl666

02/12/2011

No its not just you lol. its something we apprently cant live without but we rarely have it

angelchaser commented on The Love I Felt For You

11-08-2010

This is beautiful, a poem I would be proud to call my own, though I don't think I would have written it as well as you have. Great poem, the first of yours I've read. 10 from me.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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