The Love that Killed Me

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    • kpeery09
    • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

    The Love that Killed Me

    Here I stand facing my enemy.
    I never thought it would come down to me and my brother facing against each other to see who would win the woman that we love.
    She thought that I cheated on her, but i never did.
    My brother came and coped her, then she betrayed me.
    I threw him to the ground thinking he would stay knocked out.
     I heard my love call my name just as I was about to finish him off.
    I walked to her, she warned me about him who got back to his feet.
    I felt a cold knife go into my back,
    I fell to the ground, my brother ran away.
    She held me in her arms as I died.

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    Hiporlacking commented on The Love that Killed Me

    12-05-2009

    Now is the brother actually your bro...or are you speaking of a best friend? This is an age old story. Nice.
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    kpeery09

    12/05/2009

    I'm talking about a friend thats like a bro, but thank you

    jj1562 commented on The Love that Killed Me

    12-05-2009

    I'm not much into the sader parts of poetry but that was good 9 from me
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    whiteoleander commented on The Love that Killed Me

    12-05-2009

    wow such emotion i noticed you said my brother came and coped her?? im not great at this stuff but it seems like that should be put differently other than that good read keep up the good work.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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