The man
green leaves,
yellow leaves,
brown leaves;
that's the way
man lives!
yellow leaves,
brown leaves;
that's the way
man lives!
The man
4 Comments
Tags: Philosophy
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08-16-2010
- I've read everything you've posted so far. Your work is very...crisp. It is not overburdoned with unnecessary depth. Much like reading Haiku...you get directly to the point. Of everything you've offered, I like this one the best and I think I shall recall your words each time the leaves change colour. Thanks for sharing. Peace. JL
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09-28-2009
- yikes! very good and soooooooooo true. it is funny, i was just thinking of your poem earlier this evening....and hadnt even read it yet. we are attuned i guess. thanks
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lindabrito commented on The man
09-21-2009
- I like your work, But they are a little short. You need to give us a little more to read. Ha Ha
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dahlusion commented on The man
09-20-2009
- Nice piece. Is it just man or does woman live this way too?
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09/21/2009
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