the meaning of us

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    the meaning of us

    the meaning of us,
    we were beautiful in my fairytale that was
    sweet obsession of smelling your cologne
    i thought i was in love with u and u would be the last for sure
    i was willing to touch the mountain with our love
    like a star beaming off a christmas tree,

    6 months down the line
    im to needy now
    wanting to much of your time
    the sweet i love you;s
    just went to the midst
    i think some were u went blind,

    deep inside i want to try
    but every time i turn around
    your making me cry

    oh yesterday
    is gone
    and i feel like i wasted it
    i wasted all my time,


    12 months down the line i am kicking u out and sayin i had it up to here,
    then as love is and as soft as i am
    i let u back in
    to torcher what u started
    and hurt me like a hurricane wind

    im lost
    and i dont even know were to begin
    were back to a year and a half now
    and i am having regrets of even letting u back in

    why am i letting this happen
    i guess im not the rejector
    and i am falling for the sin.

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    Savant commented on the meaning of us

    11-03-2009

    There were a few spelling errors but I believe the idea was conveyed. I call pieces like this retrospective because they seem so real. If I can I'd like to offer you some hope. It's usually the relationships that go through the most that can stand the test of time. I'm not saying deal with pain forever, however, if it's meant to be....it will be. Continue to work on your imagery. be more descriptive. I was getting a picture while I was reading but it was blurry. (smile)

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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