The Mind

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  • what happend to people you can trust? the closest thing i get to a best friend is the pack of ciggarettes in my purse.... messed up!

The Mind

The whispers from the wind consume her mind.

It speaks lies.

Others around her are enemies in her eyes

Lies and disseat fill her ears.

The earth fills her mind with destruction and chaos

The trees watch her  waiting for the moment to strike. To destroy her fragile being

The silence around her speaks of infidelity and treason.

Her heart reminds her of what is to come.

The night brings her grief. It opens a way for past life to consumer her present and destroy her future.

As she dreams, her mind tortures her with images of her past or of events she prays she could experience

She wakes to a new day, but still has the nights events engraved into her mind

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DeepEclipse commented on The Mind

07-23-2010

Sounds like the true drifter. Against every odd. Leaving nothing but a restless mind. Ready to die but wanting to live. (She wakes to a new day, but still has the nights events engraved into her mind) - The twisted balance between night and day is my most loved attribute towards poetry. I like how you balanced the two in this line. Well written.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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