The Misunderstood Children

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To me this is my best poem
I wrote this when i was mad 
&nd telliinq all of tha kiids that are beiinq piicked on to stand up for yourself 
by any means 
Tell mehh whtt yuhh thiink of thiis poem 
comment &nd rate 
thanx and enjoy 
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The Misunderstood Children

Awkward &nd Geeky
Lame &nd overweight
The misunderstood Children 
Stood Before you reachinq out their hand
but No One to take them under there wing &nd be their friend
Makinq it harder for them in life
A struggle for them on a day tuh day basis 
Gettiinq laughed at and teased by the other kids
Makinq them hate themselves because you are insecure about yourself 
Life is too short for these children to be havinq to live their lives unhappy &nd sad forget that they should live it how they want to 
Fatty;Fatty two by four
Four eyed freak
Ugly
Gay 
Dumb
Lame
Dirty
The words that attack them everyday but are too scared to stand up for themselves hurtinq inside &nd out 
If I was them I would stand up and say sticks and stones might break my bones but your words will make me hurt you
Don't be scared defend your self anyway possible and show those other kids that you were the wrong one to mess with 
These misunderstood Children cry ;cut;&nd do bodily harm to themselves everyday
Now think about that before you make anyone feel bad or judge them on the outside and not the in because that is what's most important!

 

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cmlestrade commented on The Misunderstood Children

09-01-2009

Well it is said that we are truly are brother's keepers. Only the insecure hurl these insults to those they think are weaker. Have you ever noticed that these name callers will never do a one on one, they surround themselves with weaker bullies so they can feel a sense of power. Your profile says you are 12. these are very mature thoughts for one so young but believe me bullies don't change that much. There will always be among us. Ignoring them is still the best method. Sure you can fight them but can you fight every bully in the world.

Mehhswagserious

09/05/2009

that is very true yuh can't fiight every bully in tha world but yuh have tuh understand that kids get bullied everyday and never stand up for themselves &nd I mean fight back in many different ways lyke stand up for yourself &nd if it really came down to physical fightiinq then that would be where yuh show that they shouldn't have messed with yuh &nd make them thiink about that before they do it to some one else that is the message that i'm tryinq tuh send out tuh the little kids lyke in 5,4,3 &nd so on many people say that I'm very intelligent for mehh age and that i am a very complex thinker so I use that thinkinq into mehh poems

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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