The Morning Dew

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The Morning Dew

Have you ever seen the morning dew,
as a droplet of earths tears lands on a flower,
crimson, and violets, and yellows, in deaths final hour
Does the morning dew arrived for our soldiers afar,
those who fight for freedom, but are yet so far,
Does peace visit them in the form of an autumn rain,
Yet the quilt of death and destruction are stained by tears of lovedones so near, only to sooth our souls with signs of worth, so that in turn, our soldiers lives will not be unheard
Why is there such peace in an summer rain?
Why is there such peace in the tears of the fiery sun. that blazes on the heads of our soldiers who fight for thier lives, only to leave those they love behind.
Hoorah!

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SpiritSong commented on The Morning Dew

07-17-2009

love your stuff precious one, really well thought out and written, and heart pulling...another great write..Chinablack thank you

burkholdertyler commented on The Morning Dew

05-30-2009

This is really good. nice job. keep this going and i hope to see your poems in a book. i have had a few poems in books, one is for white oaks publishing here in USA and another for a school project.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

chinablack’s Poems (48)

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The Love Story 3
The Bayou 9
The Rain 3
Boundaries 5
Breathless 3
Untouchable 3
Pulchritude 3
Black Sky 2
The Dance 4
December 1
Broken 1
War 3
Possessed 2
Today 1
Anger 1
Its Your Loss 3
Alone 6
Music 3
The Shield 2
Is it Love? 2
Beautiful 1
Soulless 2
Cyanide 2
I Am Poetry 7
The Tear 3
SCREAM 3
The Girl Without a Face 4
Stay Clear of the Dark 2
The Fallen Angel 3
Through My Eyes 4
The Dragon in the Moon 3
The Rain 1
Stained 5
Hell 6
Mirror Image 6
The Guardian 4
Forever 7
The Butterfly 7
Happiness 4
The Knife 6
The Moment I Fell In Love 7
The Morning Dew 2
Wicked 2
Who am I 8
My Brother's Keeper 3
Fear 5
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