The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid

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  • dahlusion
  • "Knowing Then Not Knowing // Confucious Or Confusion?"

The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid

©dah

©dahlusion

To read this poem, look for my forth-coming second book
due in late-summer 2011 from Stillpoint Press.

contact: www.mystillpoint.net.

Thank you,
dah

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Springsize commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid

09-28-2010

aaaaah, a poem of fantasy / imagination ... I would hope... and not one of a bad mayonaise sandwich sitting too long in the sun, producing delusions of being the one who walked on water... [ok, that is my silly of the day]... I like your description of winter coming, bringing the winds of change, moving dust from the grounds and cobwebs from the mind... a short poem, but filled with the view of sky and crow, as night nourishes the air and all it touches, with more moisture than summer dares to dream upon this spot of the Earth....

dahlusion

10/01/2010

yes, and thank you...

danmartyjake1 commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid

09-22-2010

Exquisite wording, simple but luscious detail. I love reading your thoughts. I have missed your poems. Thanks for doing what you do. Smiles!

dahlusion

09/22/2010

thank you...I am flattered, this time...

Marsink commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid

09-18-2010

I wonder if your personage, bodily shared in that liquidity, in that, your stroll took you across the water. Whether, by foot or mind's excursion is unknown, but your passage is punctuated wit the simile and add solidity to the ironically, water-borne allusion. The night's breath is a deep contemplation which will prod me onto a plain of more imagination of its mysterious affectation. thanks for sharing a drink of water in the evening breeze! Applause building!!

dahlusion

09/19/2010

thank you...

Teardrops commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid

09-15-2010

I feel the kind of night air here and you have done it justice with your creative poem . Welcome back you have still got the touch Marie

dahlusion

09/16/2010

thank you...

Chaos128 commented on The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid

09-15-2010

Seeing transcendent events in everyday occurrences is a rare gift. The ability to describe those events, and do them more than justice is... priceless.

dahlusion

09/16/2010

thank you...

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Moths, Flame 1
To Say Goodbye Means Forgetting 1
"The Stillness Of Quiet Light" 2
The Vanishing Of Differences 1
Some god 3
Cattails 1
Invisible 3
The Persistence Of Nightmares 1
Gardener 4
Poison And Beauty 15
Moon Illusion 24
How We Live On Earth 13
Creation’s Splendid Spiritual Seduction 26
The Wings On Your Tongue 32
Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard 102
The Witch-Hunters 26
A Meditation On Autumn 33
The Most Savory Raw Liquid 28
The Alluring Wet Odor 27
Snakes Passing Out Apples 33
I Dismissed The Notion Of Death 36
The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid 28
Strangers With Memories 35
Glorify The Morning Silently 21
I Slept Late Into A Well-Worn Rest 21
the afterglow twisted its complexion 21
The Rapturous Ignorance Of My Human Moment 29
I Wait For God's Lips 31
Your Human Honey 16
I Have Gathered Your Energy 20
Poem For A Red Rose 24
discarded pages 25
when you stir in your sleep 26
scars void of desire 22
I Feel Summer’s Juice 24
Imagine Not Going To War 101
Like A Snowflake in August 36
Upon The Tender Leaves Of Spring 34
A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing 47
Hiding Behind Mythology 27
Coaxing My Soul Into The Open 24
Wet Thoughts For Thirsty Minds 46
720 Full Moons 65
Sexual Opium 41
I Praise The Morning Loudly 99
Your Sultry Whispering 29
I Feel Nothing 32
The Refusal Of Dead Roses: an unfinished love 24
ripples and waves 20
Now The Rain 18
Male Angels 21
Female Angels 18
The Atmosphere’
s Vibration
26
Show Me Something Invisible 29
Motionlessly, Mouths Touching. 19
The Scent Of My Lover 22
3:AM INSOMNIA 19
Sorrow’s Dangerous Death-Blade 33
Melodious Flames Intertwined 39
Entranced By Your Voice 28
my mouth is on yours 24
Father, I Have Sinned... 66
The Wild Mud Of Sleep 20
i am 26
Let Us Make Peace 21
That Twilight Flame 18
A Wellness Of Spirit 15
Kisses Like Deep Fruit 41
Pulsing. 13
common sense is My Savior 39
Earthy and Hot 22
Once I Was Somewhere 22
The Only God I Need 22
2 Ten AM 27
If I Ask The Dead For Memories 92
Your Intimate Voice 27
I Am Bound To You 36
Animals With The Same Motion 15
There Was Constant Throbbing 22
A Prisoner Of Hope 15
My Perfect Goddess 15
Twilight Is A Sudden Sadness 71
when the hour strikes 16
Autumn's Meloncholic Motion 28
Autumn's Organic Rust 22
My Perfect Swan 33
The Politeness Of Blue Sky 12
Upon My Lips 20
A Sensualist Articulation (Prose) 14
The Fragrance of Fantasy 43
During Our Most Secret Hours 22
Under A Sky Of Dreamy Dreams 29
The Sultry Warmth 21
When I Looked Again 29
The Sea 44
the Creator is us 29
Blades Of Lightning 30
A Dove Is Bleeding 26
I Hear Vaporous Rain 16
My Perfect Dove 35
If You Were Chocolate 59
You Do Not Deserve 37
A Shawl Of Indigo Aura 26
Then The Tumblers Rust 88
There Is Arrogance 41
The Singing From My Soul 23
You 18
Do Not Remain… 12
A Pyramid Of Stars 8
Holding A Storm 12
You Have Finally Faded 20
A Gothic Tale 19
A Gasping Goddess 18
Hour After Hour 13
Your Naked Smell 24
Unknown To Me Then 10
I Bring Myself Back From A Dream 16
When You Disappear 26