The Ocean

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  • ladydraeko
  • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

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This is my submission to the daily challenge good luck to all

The Ocean

The Ocean

Churning, pushing, flowing in and out
Waves crash leaving me upside down
Moving swiftly through the ebb and flow
I find myself turned all around

In the depths of the ocean's floor
I am but a stranger to the sea
Schools of angelfish kiss my face
How long under the water can I be

Drifting, swimming, floating by
Colors dance in the rays of light
Gliding, dancing, floating surrounds
For me it's such a short flight

Bubbles rise, my time is up
Depart from angel's kiss
Yearning, longing for more time
In the ocean is what I will miss
6/4/09

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mamasan commented on The Ocean

11-06-2009

It is amazing that even submerged at the bottom of the ocean you are able to set these verses on their way to tell your tale. I sure enjoyed the read and wish you luck in the daily competition. mamasan

kmeadows commented on The Ocean

06-22-2009

omg I loved this. I love nature poems and this is a great one! Very good and I cant wait to read more!!!

DragonAngel commented on The Ocean

06-08-2009

I am an ocean lover and spent a lot of time scubba diving in it and have to say I felt as if I was there again hehehe bravo awsome work keep up the great work

avengingangel commented on The Ocean

06-04-2009

great as always but why so short i was great look at how the poems flow out of you like you dont need to think you just writeamazing

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Dear Mommy 14
Choices 12
The Ocean 5
Who Am I? 12
Following Me... 5
Awake From Darkness 5
Infinite 19
The Dead of Night 12
Life quickly changes - The story continues - 3
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My Hidden Self 6
I love you 9
Darkness Emerges 8
Silent Serpent 21