The Oceans Secret

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    The Oceans Secret

     Beneath the beveled waters deep
    Lay hidden in her arms
    Unfolds a secret world
    With all its, beauty and charm

    Flossed shells beneath her lie
    LIke jewels her broken palace shattered
    Her tormented brow teri's

    Ship a breast half sunk
    Sand shifts its, tales of when
    Once shook with guided sails
    Seagulls board its, haven

    Under ground the sea now glows
    Shines upon its, armor
    Souls rest beneath its, walls
    Will rise one day

    Beneath the ocean deep
    Lies the city past
    Her beauty shines beneath
    Now broken once stood tall
    Now lies beneath the sea with tales 

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    blackfootlady commented on The Oceans Secret

    12-01-2010

    Awesome Betty,I totally Enjoyed this write.Keep writing Friend.God Bless -Black
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/11/2011

    Thank you so much.

    mufasa commented on The Oceans Secret

    04-26-2010

    I live on Saba ,in the Caribbean ,ancestors pirate's and Sea Captian's. The vision in this poem stirs my imagination.back to a time when sea and boats was the way of life here.thanks for this one ,love it.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/26/2010

    It must be pretty neat to live there.I would really love to see the under ground lost Sea cities and find treasure. But thats been done at a cost I am sure. How cool just to be there.Thank you.

    SavVySam commented on The Oceans Secret

    04-26-2010

    Hi Betty~This is a wonderful poem, filled with many of my favorite things..The Sea, ships & sails and buried treasure! I loved this!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/26/2010

    Me too, how fun it would be to discover treasure and to see ships like that. There is one over this way I have never seen but at a distance. Children are allowed to go see it on field trips.

    jyothi commented on The Oceans Secret

    04-22-2010

    A poetic heart can see nature in the different way. I'm feeling happy by reading this poem.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/23/2010

    I am glad you liked it. Thank you.

    danmartyjake1 commented on The Oceans Secret

    04-17-2010

    Tales that certainly envelope and embrace the mind and you have done so with this creative write for it! Bravo!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/23/2010

    Thank you so much. I appreicate the thought.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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