The one we call Angel

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    The one we call Angel

    I felt so awake,
    I felt so alive,
    like i could finally breathe,
    felt the hearbeat,
    shaking the ground,
    feel the wind,
    from the fluttering wings,
    not a single sound,
    lets make a round,
    shes still breathing,
    silently on the ground,
    cant you feel rush in this,
    no time left,
    someone call in the reff,
    what should we do?,
    someone make the call,
    No air coming through,
    Date and time of death?
    Whats the name?
    She is not known for fame,
    Shes best known as angel,
    the one who saves us all from the death,
    we need to set her free,
    to let her be happy,
    lie her down,
    watch her feathers fall to the ground,
    while lovedones hold her hand,
    she floats up the the heavens,
    where shes always looking down
    Where she can rest,
    For the best.

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    inkmaster commented on The one we call Angel

    10-25-2011

    Very nicely done ...You should take a bow for this one....

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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