The Pain Inside

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    The Pain Inside

    I feel like I'm alone by myself,
    Alone in a dark room in a dark place on top of tha tallest shelf,
    All my so call friends are backstabbin,
    They talking bout me behind my back but together we laughin,
    The love i use to have had torn me down,
    I went from everyday smiling to now a frown,
    This stupid pain is killing me deeply,
    I try to sleep it away but I dont get sleepy,
    I try to pray it away,
    But it seems like God wont answer me anyway,
    But God said he wont but on more than we can bare,
    So this must be a test I have to be aware,
    My feelings I cant hide I have to share,
    If I dont share the pain is going to tear me into pieces,
    The voltures coming from the sky to come and finish me,
    Now I'm witnessing my body fadin',
    Thanks to this stupid pain my body decayin',
    And now I see the light glowin',
    And lookin down on people as I'm floatin'.

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    jrblood59 commented on The Pain Inside

    08-29-2010

    i swear on everythng dis one go live im bouta read part two u kno i kan always relate to pain bro u pretty good we mite have to kompete lol

    JayJ420 commented on The Pain Inside

    06-15-2010

    remind me much of tupac's poems.....love it cuz we all feel lonely once in a while....

    candicane88 commented on The Pain Inside

    05-14-2009

    loved it. it was really good.

    tinkbabey commented on The Pain Inside

    04-18-2009

    wow. dat deep. n gud 2. dnt seem lyke u juz toss dez 2 getha.

    chadallac74 commented on The Pain Inside

    03-04-2009

    Nice rhythm!!! I have felt that pain, I relate.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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