the pain

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    • JonTalbain
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    the pain

    In Pain

     

    The World aches

    A heart breaks

    A life taken

    A word mistaken

    A Man's Game

    A Woman's Shame

    The Grassy plain

    The Life is the same

    A Child deranged

    A mind insane

    Crying out, as they are in pain

     

    The earth quakes

    Our mind's shakes

    The wind bear

    As our souls tear

    A crying shame and an end to a game

    Tormented by pain and fire

    Subsequent lust and endless desire

    Words from ahead

    Tears for the dead

    Lessons decreased

    And more are deceased

    Struggles for the poor

    And triumphs for the rich

    The cliché to be told

    "Life's a bitch"

    What more can come from this life inane

                                 So do I go forth now and forever in pain.

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    DeepEclipse commented on the pain

    08-27-2010

    It gets to the point you just quit asking "why." Justs wastes energy that can be propelled to other things. True reflection of a shitty situation. I guess if its' one thing about pain, is it will never betray you. Friends to the end. Solid write man. And this part (Struggles for the poor And triumphs for the rich) - just damn........
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