the path

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    the path

    the path is narrow but through
    will you love to follow the truth
    my only worry is to choose a pathway
    a road that leads to success
    I only think about the right process
    I stand on a road confused with many goalposts
    choose between a T junction and a roundabout
    one leads to two ways
    while the other returns to start
    don't wander but find the wonder
    seek till you see the stream
    the only path i know is through the water
    find yours it doesn't matter
    destiny is distinct with difference
    each path have it's own occurence
    we meet obstacles in each path
    but be sure your own is through

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    flyfshr57 commented on the path

    05-18-2009

    Nicely Done, I sense we share some of the same opinions about life's paths. Did you mean "through" as to overcome an obstacle or "thorough" as to examine ones path completely?

    blujean

    08/02/2009

    am happy i have that is following the same path as iam keep up pal is never easy.tnks fro this.bliss

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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