The Peak of Suckiness

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The Peak of Suckiness

School might suck,
everyone knows,
when all they wanted
was to see you grow.

What i mean by they,
is your parents...
thats what,
they dont seem to see why you hate it
but,
they continue to push you,
 and continue to shove,
when all you wanted,
was some parental love.

Its hard for them both
to see you so frail,
but its harder on you
whenever you fail.
 
 You go to school everyday,
dreading to begin,
by the end of the day,
 you drag yourself off the ground again,
and you're afraid to be an outcast.....
but more scared to fit in.

Its hard to go to school everyday,
knowing everyone hates you in every way,
the clothes you wear,
the person you are,
 the grades you fare,
your type of car.

.......Ok.......
maybe not all of them hate you,
 you do have a couple of friends,
 yeah, thats true,
and.... they are real friends,
 you have 1 maybe 2.

Its not all bad there,
 there are good people too,
most of the chess geeks and nerds like you,
but in front of the populars,
 they'd never show it,
 they had a cover,
 and they could not blow it.

Well one day,
 the populars started picking on you,
 you turned around,
 and said screw you too,
 they got really mad,
 it was time to fight back,
it was really bad....
but....
courage and stupidity,
you certainly did not lack.

 The nerds and the geeks
 band together with you and your friends,
it ws us vs. them,
 geeks and nerds vs. populars,
spectators wondered who'd win in the end....
the great battle started,
 it was a war of the wills,
but the hearts of both in the battle were filled,
with great emotion,
 on both parts,
both sides fought with all of their hearts.

Geeks and nerds fought with tube cases and flutes,
populars fought with expensive purses and boots,
the geeks and nerds fought with precision and care,
the populars....
they were all worried about their hair.
 in the end most of the populars were down for the count,
the rest had all run away,
no doubt.

So this is the end,
 of my poem...that is,
so now i show my geek side,
"over and out"

just remember........

If you ever have problems with popular people at school,
look to the geeks and nerds,
they are your tool.

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ontherise1984 commented on The Peak of Suckiness

04-09-2010

The reality check that this poem describes, provides two advanvced technique, that I like to see: dichtonomy and counterbalance. It begins to visualize your role as a teen in the role of pleasing mentors, then it flips the focus to the peers around you. It provides two alternatives to meeting the demands, showing in the end that, by what you choose, you are developing another counterbalance in your future. Amazing pattern of thought!

BringMeBullets commented on The Peak of Suckiness

03-25-2010

Ha ha. Nice. This is good. I have always been at the bottom of the food chain. Screw those jocks... They got nothing on your true friends. A write from the heart. Loved it!

hoda commented on The Peak of Suckiness

03-13-2010

Aww this is such a cute and funny and true poem. I really like it. Good job! ^_^

redbloodink commented on The Peak of Suckiness

03-09-2010

I have to say the imaginary side was funny the reality side was true..... I was just a geek in school too....... nice write I enjoyed it ..... red

Musicmynded1 commented on The Peak of Suckiness

03-04-2010

I was that one popular (if u would) who stuck up for anyone who seemd that they needed it.. great piece here. luvd it.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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