The piece of heaven

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The human being with his knowledge, science and spirit is not able think of his salvation and is locked up in the net of the Satan's trick. Now, its time to accept the God in order to get rid of his debts and the eternal damnation.

The piece of heaven


The life gifted

With the piece of heaven

Still, unsatisfied

Borrows the ladder of the hell

With interest to

Mount the sky to own it.

Stars look fallen into the sky

With the sight of greedy eyes;

Minds start picking up of the stars

And could succumb only

The wounds in the life of war

In the space of journey;

The heaven was adjust against

The portion of interest of the hell;

Yet, the principal and interest

Due is compounding

To swallow the life into its belly;

The piece of heaven given once

Redeems the life, but not the debt;

Now, the redemption is lost

And only consumption is the gift;

It is not the piece of the heaven

That was lost, but the peace of God;

Cry and cry until the paradise

 Is moved and the hell have left;

 

                       - R K CHOWDARY  

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Coltsfan777 commented on The piece of heaven

03-06-2011

very deep and inspirational! I Love your style of writing. Speaks with such a deep meaning and flows right into the soul to set it on fire.

RKCHOWDARY11

03/07/2011

Dear Coltsfan777 Thank you once again for your loving and appreciating comment on this poem. My poems are moving around the world to find the beautiful eyes, heart, mind soul like yours to embrace it with love. You are also welcome to give your neutral comments also so that I can improve my poetry. With Love RKC

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

RKCHOWDARY11’s Poems (26)

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