The Pillow
Her red hair
fiery flickers
around her face.
Her head leans
to one side
rests on her shoulder
soft as her tender
breaths become
my sighs
The Pillow
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RHPeat commented on The Pillow
12-07-2010
- An interesting form of personification at use here in this poem. A shifting into one another's feelings. It is wonderfully done as well. Nice writing Polo. A very subtle as well I might add. A poet friend// RH Peat
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gmcookie commented on The Pillow
09-04-2010
- Paolo, This is a beautiful portrait and a great example of how less can be more. Quiet simplicity is what this is.
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SEVEN commented on The Pillow
08-13-2010
- Dlid u write this about my eX? I kinda saw her in this poem...Good write Paolo as usual your piece capture me... Kudo points for you
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Teardrops commented on The Pillow
07-27-2010
- I see the beautiful picture you are drawing with words . Really a wonderful poem Marie
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