The Possession


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The Possession

The fear is still lingering ... The nightmare's continuing. My heart races in panic, My thoughts scattered and frantic. My soul cries out in despair ... Screams of the dark fill the air. The beast emerges from within, Soon the feeding will begin. Hidden deep within the dark ... Lurking in my blackened heart. The beast attacks - raping my soul, No escaping this nightly toll. The fire burning from within ... Singes and chars my melting skin. My flesh drips into pools of blood, Sanity lost within the flood. In stigmata, my vessel lies ... Just, bleeding palms within your eyes. Beyond the point of no return, Forever ~ I am his to burn! KjK090610

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Rhymer commented on The Possession


WOW!! I see I have missed some of your work, and what a trajedy. This was so simplistic yet so dark it grabed me by the heart. A truly excelllent piece and into my favs.



Rhymer - Thx again for the qcccoladees my fremd1 I appreciate the kudo's aa usual1 ken ;) Ken

Springsize commented on The Possession


ooooooooh, you have not disappointed Reader... you depict the resignation of evil within in perfect rhyme and meter [of course]... and leave with no recourse, but to relinquish any change... frightening and cruel....



Thanks Spring! I appreciate all your reads, comments and kudos! :) I'm happy you enjoy my dark side and my twisted imagination. lol! I don't feel so alone now ... lol! :) Thanks again! :) Ken

dahlusion commented on The Possession


oh, my! more blood and terror from the best of Gothic minds. bravo!!! peace and light, dah



Thank you so much Dah! :) You once again humble me Sir. I appreciate the read and comments as always! :) Ken

Charlie23 commented on The Possession


Damn Knight! Nicely done....I enjoyed my friend!



Thanks So Much Charlie! :) I'm happy you enjoy my twisted dark writes my friend! As usual ... Thanks for the read and great comments! :) Ken

Marsink commented on The Possession


Ghastly gore of churning chores! I hope you'll snap out of it... or has your fate been irrevocably sealed? The pace quickens as description sickens into a vivd nightmare as you so shared---and deftly so!! Your work is a ballad of Darkest Knight. Applause!!!



Thanks Marsink! lol! :) Fear not my friend .. M soul is fine .. it's my twisted mind that worries me. lol! :) Glad ya enjoyed it Pal. Thanks for the comments and Kudo's! :) Ken

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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