The Psychopath

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By request I posted my darker version of this one.  If you want more, read Dark Psycho

The Psychopath

The Psychopath

 

She saunters down the dark, dreary lane.

Only If I could  give her a taste of my pain.

No nagging conscience to try to avoid.

You may call me crazy.  A case for Freud.

 

Having a need to quench my desire

Behind cold eyes all my senses on fire.

A sharp razor eased from my coat pocket.

My body aches, nobody to stop it.

 

My heart is steady I have no remorse.  

She will be just another bride corpse.

Hearing the heels of her hip boots clack,

My pace surges as I close the gap.

 

Almost upon her,  her pulse quickens.

Smell of sex and sweet perfume thickens.

Hearing soft gasps I am getting my kicks.

She is unaware I am now on her six.

 

Grabbing her pale, thin wrist,  she screams.

The coppers in blue arrive on the scene.

Police shouting and guns cocking the sound.

They tackle me and cuff me on the ground.

 

The jury said guilty on all twelve counts.

No one will ever know the total amount.

Could not hack being the prison whore bitch.

Death at my own hand.  No soul, just black pitch.


-MootPoint, the Dark Knight.
Oct. 19, 2009

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Mandi commented on The Psychopath

09-05-2013

Very interesting..I believe this scenario has taken place a time or two. Say, you wouldn't know anything about that would you?

MootPoint

09/05/2013

You chose a dark one.

danmartyjake1 commented on The Psychopath

03-02-2010

This suspenseful, deliberate driving poem tells a great story that yields nothing but terror. Great Write!

Rhymer commented on The Psychopath

12-11-2009

Wow! You had my pulse racing in this most excellent write. Your talent is really displayed with this piece.

connsk8 commented on The Psychopath

11-28-2009

I am glad you have your poetry as an outlet!!! This was so convincing it was scary!!!

Sicc1 commented on The Psychopath

11-09-2009

I like this very well rhythm-ed with the words and images.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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