THE QUESTION

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    this Has to do with my belief in reincarnation and the unanswered questions that man has.

    THE QUESTION

    who is in charge?
    up in the stars?
    Feeling tears over the years
    touch me, from the past
    is it over? What does last?
    blowing sands, made out of glass
    Looking through the ruby hue
    Sunsets of time
    one was mine
    Catacombs, walking lost
    bodies laying, covered with moss
    do you see? Watch the clock!
    Does it tick, or does it tock?
    feel the pain, sorrow with rain
    the veils thin, will they let me in?
    Breating dust, returning to sin
    Circleing Squares, did we have fins?
     Pay homage to one
    who shows us his son
    How far does it go? we allmove so slow
    all under one...

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    angel2 commented on THE QUESTION

    08-12-2009

    i just read the question poem and its awesome miss reen. it goes and flows understandble meaning.

    REEN

    08/18/2009

    oh thank you so much it is just my thoughts!!

    WordSlinger commented on THE QUESTION

    08-02-2009

    Interesting it be, individuality, the graet quest in reality, I like it. :) Welcome to OP

    REEN

    08/04/2009

    thank you so much i know its deep but it is describable

    jesusfreake commented on THE QUESTION

    08-02-2009

    hmmm..very mysterious ma'am...i like it though verydifferent with various items u described...this poem was one of those poems that are more mysterious and wild than anything which makes this poem an eye opener that never makes u want to shut it...

    REEN

    08/04/2009

    I guess within my mind I am always seeking the mysterious, and ways to undeerstand what we dont see.. if that makes any sense?

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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