The Rain in My Head

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    The Rain in My Head

    There is a storm
    Building in my head
    So strong I drown in its winds
    Even the moon can not save me
    This time

    It starts in my soul
    Build and raging
    Taking all that is good
    Twisting it for none

    Venting seems to not help
    Just breathing kills me
    Taking all that I have
    Destroying it

    Left with nothing
    Gives me grace
    Yet pains my soul
    Murdering my lust

    Smile no more
    Laugh never again
    Just knowing its change
    Alone I am; with the rain in my head

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    mysticpoet commented on The Rain in My Head

    12-21-2008

    Wow. That's all I can say. Very vivid.

    beautifuldeath commented on The Rain in My Head

    12-16-2008

    nicely crafted.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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