The Rape Of The Swan

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    The Rape Of The Swan

    To love, love and not it's meaning...
    Hardens the heart in monstrous ways.
    No one is ours and who is learning?
    Those whose loyalty is, loves betrayed us?
    They are not girls, with girls softness.

    They love not all of us but they have hardens minds almost often.
    It's not we, but a dream that must cover them.
    A woman who lives in love but can't give it.

    To love, love and not it's meaning...
    Hard, is ours, has this love betrayed us?
    They are not girls, with a girls softness.
    But they don't know that love for it is not love.

    They love not all of us but the love they have hardens the soul and mind every so often.
    It's not we, but a dream that must cover them.
    A woman who lives in love but can't give it.
    Her parts are not to give but they where taken.

    Even the great swan by the river can her fingers dangle?
    She can't move....her feathers break.

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    Phoenix9 commented on The Rape Of The Swan

    09-20-2009

    this is a great write. "i have a heart that beats, yet there is still a black hole where there should be a heart, and whats so brittle, the touch from the cold or the emptiness that freezes the soul".but all must heal, a part of my poem that i felt conveys about the same as what i felt from reading this

    Shan commented on The Rape Of The Swan

    07-01-2009

    "Hardens the heart in monstrous ways", this line depicts the pain experienced by the victim....

    UnKnoWnCrEaTor commented on The Rape Of The Swan

    01-27-2009

    what did you actually mean by that? " Even the great swan by the river, can her fingers dangle? She can't move....her feathers break..." please answer me Mrs.Dinescu...

    dahlusion commented on The Rape Of The Swan

    01-26-2009

    "Even the great swan by the river, can her fingers dangle? She can't move....her feathers break"… this line is already a poetic master piece.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Dinescu’s Poems (10)

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    The Rape Of The Swan 4
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    My Love 0
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    Alone 1
    The Opened Eye 1