The Raw

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    The Raw

     What is true? Raw order of what is so.
    Words we're afraid to speak, knowing
    in time they eventually leak. out...

    What if we all knew... things last in
    bliss for a decade or more.  Only...
    what if we could own that lonely.truth.
    Would we love more? Be more, adore
    more too?  Forgive more?  Would we
    know more of the person we call 'You'.
    Even if it's Me. Too?

    Is love a position unchanged? Raw and
    never rearranged?  Did it stand blistering
    in the sun, bored with old jokes once fun?
    Glaring eyes so bright they burned when
    the forget me thoughts forgot to turn...
    and blink.  Did love flow like the waters
    poured. Right down and through the sink?


    What if we all knew... it's a cycle to be
    in truth.  Knowing going in might sound
    like Love isn't ever true or found like
    "New" is just a thing we use and journeys
    we do... but ... what if in this raw state
    of true we knew how to appreciate what
    we might lose?

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    WordSlinger commented on The Raw

    07-05-2009

    That's what I'm talking about, This is amazing. The questions are so good. This is the truth. I really like this Izzy, right On..I love this part.. what if in this raw state of true we knew how to appreciate what we might lose?
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    IzzyGumbo

    07/05/2009

    Hugs you my dear friend. :) Little looking inward.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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