THE REAL WORLD

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    I am a paranormal investigator, who is also a empath, i feel things and feel the spirits emotions, esp. if it is a sadness. I wrote this as this is trully how I feel.

    THE REAL WORLD

    walking in the feeling begins,
    the past the rust
    emotions embedded in everything I touch!
    how many walk behind the veil?
    investigators looking for the holy grail
    intensity within
    my head begins to spin
    fun house effect is it the truth?
    I begin to feel what will I lose?
    closeness skin begins to tell
    something that has been close to hell
    I don't turn the page
    might act on the rage
    fear will never take control
    the madness begins!
    they want me to know they are there!
    a touch a sting
    pulling my hair! Im tired feeling wasted
    can't hardly walk
    is that someone trying to talk?
    a beacon they say
    lost in the way.....

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    lizardlylove09 commented on THE REAL WORLD

    10-12-2009

    i really like this one a lot. You write a lot like i do.. i mean we have a lot of simalarities in the way we write things...

    REEN

    10/12/2009

    THIS IS SO TRUE WE DO!! ISNT IT COOL??

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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