The Rendezvous

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    The Rendezvous

     When I walked out
    into the afternoon,
    I noticed a different sun
    so extraordinary
    that its brilliance
    did not blind my eyes.
    Its rays gave everything
    a fantastic brightness,
    transparent and cool.
    Marvelling at this vision,
    I caught my reflection
    in the car window
    and saw another person
    where I used to be.
    The experience of you
    reshaped my identity.
    I could feel your smile
    turning me a richer,
    deeper shade of gold.
    Could you feel my fingers
    stroking my satisfaction
    into your wonderful skin?
    I want your special sun
    to shine on me again
    with all your fire.

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    StandingBear commented on The Rendezvous

    08-20-2009

    An excellent, creative work relating the light romance/eroticism so often denied people due to the rush of life. When experienced everything is opened to the eyes, the senses in a pleasant, different fashion. Great write.
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    NenaT

    08/23/2009

    From your comments, I can tell you completely got this poem. Thank you

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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