The Ride Of Your Life

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    The Ride Of Your Life



    A single ticket
    for a single ride
    Everything you need
    can be found inside

    There will be things unseen
    surprises abound
    ups, downs, curves, and thrills
    so hold on tight, or be thrown around

    Try all you want
    with plans you make
    there are many options
    and many paths to take

    Some focus on the scenery
    and some on the speed
    Some try to slow it down
    and some grab away with greed

    Some ride with focus
    and others without a care
    Some want to sit still
    and others try, to go everywhere

    So ride as you want
    until your heart is content
    When your ride is over
    all you will have, is what it meant


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    Buffybytes commented on The Ride Of Your Life

    07-25-2011

    An insightfully presented common sense message delivered in a very creative poetic vehicle. Great work

    danmartyjake1 commented on The Ride Of Your Life

    01-12-2011

    Like the rollercoasters, this is the first one I think I have come across in poetry. It does capture the essence of the ride...

    Teardrops commented on The Ride Of Your Life

    01-04-2011

    Now i know why i love your poetry . It spell binding . Yes the ride in life is worth it . Thanks for a great poem and read Marie

    Belovedespair commented on The Ride Of Your Life

    01-03-2011

    "all you'll have is what it meant" this is a perfect ending. Well done.

    tenderpoison commented on The Ride Of Your Life

    12-22-2010

    wonderful metaphor - really well written, but I stumbled a bit in the second stanza (5 lines, not 4). I call it a journey, you call it a ride - either way, I love the last line :)

    RPT40

    01/04/2011

    Thank you so much for the great comment. Those 5 line stanzas annoyed me as well, so I tightened them up or you lol

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    RPT40’s Poems (10)

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    The Vision 20
    The Ride Of Your Life 25
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    Tomorrow 15
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    The Current 14