THE RIDE TO WORK

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The re-telling of a fantastic commute to passion.....Enjoy!

THE RIDE TO WORK

4AM  and  I’m  still  staring  at  the  ceiling
Cursing  neighbors  prolonged  love  making
Hurry  up  so  I can  think  clearly Hating 
 This  reminder of  my  two lonely legs 
Where  four  twisting  and  rubbing  should’ve  been 
Thanking  GOD  that  I’m  still here  to  feel morning
Cursing  the  late  Sunday  movie,  not  me  for  watching
Stepping  on  cold  wood  floors  creaking, to  brew  coffee
Checking  for  transit  and  weather, while  running  the  shower
Texting  my  friend  to  see  if   she  is  driving…….
Smiling  at  the  blessing  of  a  ride  instead of  commuting
6AM and  I’m racing  up  her  stairs, as  I  don’t  see the  car  warming
As  I  wait  outside her  door,  I can hear  barefoot steps instead of shoes
Thinking  damn  she  ain’t  even  ready, projecting  an  ill  type  mood
Door  creaks  open  as  footsteps  I’m  hearing  retreating
I  yell  out  good morning,  hurry  up,  now  see  you  rushing  me
As  I  turn  the  long hallway  corner  to  find  her  still  under  covers
I flip  back  the  sheets and  yell  stop  playing, as  I  stop  mid  sentence
Knowing my place  I  take  off  my clothes  and  shoes  and  slide  in place
My projector is  projecting  as  her  heat  is  seeking  out  my  missle
Thong  is  wiggled  down and  away  as  I  stay straddling  her  sway
Her  warmth  in  body  and  atmosphere  of  cozy  under  covers  so  tingling
As  my  spine  shivers  as  we  poke  and  grind  feverishly  but  in unison
I’m kissing  neck,  rubbing  her  breast, and  licking  arms  and  back
She lifts  her  leg  with  guile  as  I slide  on  up  and  inside, still on my side
Long  stroking  and  winding  and  breathing,  she  is  panting……..
We  are  panting  as  covers  are  knocked  aside  as we  are  hard grinding
Still  in  stride  as  in  ballroom dancing, except  being  on  our  side prancing
She  goes  epileptic  in  movements  as  I  continue  to  ride  her  waves
Rippling  in  moisture,  I  put  legs  on  shoulders  for  some  missionary  
Now  stauncher  than  ever  I  begin  to  dig  in  pushing  past  the  wetness
Back  wall  reaching , has  my eyes  reaching  back  in  sight  seeing  ecstasy
She  is  screaming  begging  me  to  let  go  of  my crazy  load  as she is OMG(ing)
Crazy  intoxicated, I drop  one  leg  down  and  curve  beat  her  from the side
As  I  can  feel  the  countdown  to  explosion  of  an  avalanche  of  little children
Still prolonging  such  an  incredible  performance  turning  her  over  wildstyle
She  closes  her  legs,  laying  on  her stomach humming, expecting  the  incoming
Riding  her  thighs,  while  holding  hips  I  drive  in  and  she  pokes  back 
Meeting  me  but  climaxing  and  relaxing  in  exhaustion  as  I  drive  to Boston
Going  way  up  north,  as  the  blizzard  rips  through  me  and  we  both  shaking
She  pushes  me  off and  says  what  you  do  to  me?  As  I  climb  back  on  top
As  we  lay  silently swaying,  both  feeling  so  good  and  satisfied…….
9:45AM  we  must  have  dosed  off  between  the  hard  rocking  and  swaying
She  heads  to  the  bathroom,  as  I  watch  her  curves  disappear  around  the curve
Throbbing  at  the  involvement  and intricacy  of  our  intimacy  has  me  rising
As  my  missle  still  has  the  coordinates  plus  my  heart  quickens  after  her  by mental reminiscent pictures
She  looks  at  me  in  surprise  as  we  kiss  and  embrace  at  a  slow  dance  pace
Energy  is  pulsating  in  me  so  in  one  motion  I lift  her  up  on  the sink  stroking
She  falls  back  wrapping  her  thunderous  thighs around  me  tonguing  and  bouncing
Losing  balance  and  lifting  and  restarting  again  until  10:30AM
As  we  each  call  out  for  each  other  and  return  to  bed  to  snuggle…..enjoying
This extra  special impromptu  loving  holiday  detour  we  laughingly  call……
THE  RIDE  TO WORK!!!
4AM  and  I’m  still  staring  at  the  ceiling
Cursing  neighbors  prolonged  love  making
Hurry  up  so  I can  think  clearly Hating 
 This  reminder of  my  two lonely legs 
Where  four  twisting  and  rubbing  should’ve  been 
Thanking  GOD  that  I’m  still here  to  feel morning
Cursing  the  late  Sunday  movie,  not  me  for  watching
Stepping  on  cold  wood  floors  creaking, to  brew  coffee
Checking  for  transit  and  weather, while  running  the  shower
Texting  my  friend  to  see  if   she  is  driving…….

Smiling  at  the  blessing  of  a  ride  instead of  commuting
6AM and  I’m racing  up  her  stairs, as  I  don’t  see the  car  warming
As  I  wait  outside her  door,  I can hear  barefoot steps instead of shoes
Thinking  damn  she  ain’t  even  ready, projecting  an  ill  type  mood
Door  creaks  open  as  footsteps  I’m  hearing  retreating
I  yell  out  good morning,  hurry  up,  now  see  you  rushing  me
As  I  turn  the  long hallway  corner  to  find  her  still  under  covers
I flip  back  the  sheets and  yell  stop  playing, as  I  stop  mid  sentence
Knowing my place  I  take  off  my clothes  and  shoes  and  slide  in place
My projector is  projecting  as  her  heat  is  seeking  out  my  missle
Thong  is  wiggled  down and  away  as  I  stay straddling  her  sway
Her  warmth  in  body  and  atmosphere  of  cozy  under  covers  so  tingling
As  my  spine  shivers  as  we  poke  and  grind  feverishly  but  in unison
I’m kissing  neck,  rubbing  her  breast, and  licking  arms  and  back
She lifts  her  leg  with  guile  as  I slide  on  up  and  inside, still on my side
Long  stroking  and  winding  and  breathing,  she  is  panting……..
We  are  panting  as  covers  are  knocked  aside  as we  are  hard grinding
Still  in  stride  as  in  ballroom dancing, except  being  on  our  side prancing

She  goes  epileptic  in  movements  as  I  continue  to  ride  her  waves
Rippling  in  moisture,  I  put  legs  on  shoulders  for  some  missionary  
Now  stauncher  than  ever  I  begin  to  dig  in  pushing  past  the  wetness
Back  wall  reaching , has  my eyes  reaching  back  in  sight  seeing  ecstasy
She  is  screaming  begging  me  to  let  go  of  my crazy  load  as she is OMG(ing)
Crazy  intoxicated, I drop  one  leg  down  and  curve  beat  her  from the side
As  I  can  feel  the  countdown  to  explosion  of  an  avalanche  of  little children
Still prolonging  such  an  incredible  performance  turning  her  over  wildstyle
She  closes  her  legs,  laying  on  her stomach humming, expecting  the  incoming
Riding  her  thighs,  while  holding  hips  I  drive  in  and  she  pokes  back 
Meeting  me  but  climaxing  and  relaxing  in  exhaustion  as  I  drive  to Boston
Going  way  up  north,  as  the  blizzard  rips  through  me  and  we  both  shaking
She  pushes  me  off and  says  what  you  do  to  me?  As  I  climb  back  on  top
As  we  lay  silently swaying,  both  feeling  so  good  and  satisfied…….
9:45AM  we  must  have  dosed  off  between  the  hard  rocking  and  swaying
She  heads  to  the  bathroom,  as  I  watch  her  curves  disappear  around  the curve
Throbbing  at  the  involvement  and intricacy  of  our  intimacy  has  me  rising
As  my  missle  still  has  the  coordinates  plus  my  heart  quickens  after  her  by mental reminiscent pictures
She  looks  at  me  in  surprise  as  we  kiss  and  embrace  at  a  slow  dance  pace
Energy  is  pulsating  in  me  so  in  one  motion  I lift  her  up  on  the sink  stroking
She  falls  back  wrapping  her  thunderous  thighs around  me  tonguing  and  bouncing
Losing  balance  and  lifting  and  restarting  again  until  10:30AM
As  we  each  call  out  for  each  other  and  return  to  bed  to  snuggle…..enjoying
This extra  special impromptu  loving  holiday  detour  we  laughingly  call…
THE  RIDE  TO WORK!!!

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Tempy commented on THE RIDE TO WORK

10-28-2009

nice work. i think your train picture was very cheeky,

SILKYTWEED

11/06/2009

(Smile) Thanks Tempy...the whole episode was pretty cheeky...LOL!!!

MalikPeterson commented on THE RIDE TO WORK

10-23-2009

Well you had me fooled with the title lol. I thought there was going to be some going to work as in the office...but it definitely seems that there was work being done. It is very descriptive and vivid. The "shift" in the focus of it was unexpected and the surprise makes you want to continue reading on. Good work.

SILKYTWEED

10/26/2009

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Chaos128 commented on THE RIDE TO WORK

10-22-2009

Ha ha sounds to me like you got all aspects covered, Silky. Thanks for describing the ride.

SILKYTWEED

10/22/2009

Thank you brother, as you can tell, this is definitely a personal commuting experience I could sooo get use to one....Thanks for your comments!!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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