The right path

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  • Confusion

    The right path
    Confusion. It takes over swiftly and leaves you wondering who you really are and what you should be doing. Should you follow your own heart? Or the wishes of the one you care for most? By doing one you could loose a peace of who you are and chance never retrieving it again. By doing the other you may loose the one you care for more then life its self. The answer of course, is …..

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    lonewolf commented on The right path

    01-07-2009

    another cleverly creative poem. you definately have talent.
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    charliedue commented on The right path

    11-20-2008

    lol. please contact me. this thing is not send my comments right...lol ty
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    charliedue commented on The right path

    11-20-2008

    rite the words... you need now form.. Pure poetry" unquote.
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    charliedue commented on The right path

    11-20-2008

    Yeah... I know what you mean. Nice work. remindes me of the way I have wrote and still write time to time. A wise english teacher told me once when I worried about form ever now and then... quote "form"... when you can hold a pen and let your heart w
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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