the robin

2 Comments

Poem Commentary

song about a kind girl.

the robin

<>



she was 24 seasons away
but summer lived in her soul
she circled my garden and ate the wildflowers
killed the weeds and countless hours
she struck such poses
among my roses

i would watch her dance and bound
round and round like a fearless phantom
then like the robin with her head to the ground
she'd listen for me

on my morning window sill
her shrill song woke me too early for the day
but i appreciated her efforts and smiled anyway
i put up seeds but she let them be
too kind and alive she left them for me
her mixture of pagan and pageantry
designs how i miss her, do you see
and like the robin with her head to the ground
she'd listen for me





<>

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

cttgad commented on the robin

09-20-2012

Love the emotions and visuals in this wonderful, delightful read. Thank you for sharing it

Phission

09/21/2012

thank you oh so very much for commenting and reading me. thank you.

cheronld commented on the robin

08-29-2012

Somebody has been bitten by the love bug I see....lol....great visuals my friend....loved the gentle flow and tentative touch of emotional content....Lucky woman I have to say....and....this is truly on a different path of "Phission"....another alter ego maybe????.....nicely done....Cher

Phission

08/29/2012

hmmmmm maybe. lol. my words and thoughts have been spreading like veins and branches to the sky. that is the only way i can describe my current state. thank you, Cher.

cheronld

08/29/2012

"my words and thoughts have been spreading like veins and branches to the sky.".....Now that is just another Poem screaming to come out and spread its wings and fly.....lol....Happy Journey my friend....Cher

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

Phission’s Poems (24)

Title Comments
Title Comments
hands 1
freight rain 2
goodbye 8
sensual central 1
goodnight, summer night 3
the robin 2
gun 4
top of the sky 2
eulogy 2
do you love me 3
i lost her 4
home 2
observations in random rows 3
these days 1
music and dreams 3
point blank 5
the gift 2
breathing love 6
position 8
name 5
one 3
companion 2
beware 4
this ( for annie ) 3