The Romantics

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    My muse in L.A. is a painter of the finest art I have yet seen.  This is an accurate account of our relationship.

    The Romantics

    The poet speaks with pen in hand,
    Words written in blood the color of ink;
    The artist speaks with heart on sleeve,
    And fills the room with razor-edged valentines.
    Rice paper feelings,
    Once so cleverly concealed,
    Crack and curl under the heat of words
    That burn with fiery passion.

    The poet and the artist,
    So oddly matched in temperament and vision --
    Dreamers who build castles in the sky;
    One would lovingly keep them forever,
    One tears them down when weary of the game.
    Both see the poem in the innocent child,
    Both recognize the romance in the grotesque
          and the tragedy in beauty --
    And who can say who their tears are for?
    And who knows, when their laughter rings,
    What absurdity has caused their mirth,
    For they know the ironies of life so well.

    The sad and silent tears of the poet
    And the bitter, angry tears of the artist
    Create a relationship so painfully sensitive
    That it borders on hostility --
    Yet this fragile alliance transcends basic emotions.
    They toast that which gives warm comfort,
    Easing the hunger for that which neither can hope
          to possess:
    Because the poet hears what others do not
    And the artist sees what others cannot,
    Immortality shimmers in the distance,
    Translucent and forbidding,
    Teasing them with glimpses of eternity
    That face away in the twilight mist.

    For love so tender and joy so frail,
    The poet and the artist sacrifice sanity ad logic
          to obsession and dismay --
    Gazing at each other through an empty glass of wine,
    Reach out to soothe the pain,
    And slash each other bloody again and again.
    The poet sighs and weeps and screams on paper;
    The artist laughs and revels in his madness,
    Splashing canvas with the colors of his soul --
    They suffer the agonizing certainty of oblivion
    While riding high on the wings of time.

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    Keoni commented on The Romantics

    09-29-2009

    Hello Fellow Poet, How are you doing today? I am passing thru to let you know of a website you will love. Have you heard of Words That Live?? It's my pleasure to introduce to Words That Live.. it's a site that's dedicated to poetry sand connecting the reader to the writer!! Words That Live offers a great amount of features that makes poetry and creative thinking fun. You'll be a part of the world community sharing ideas and expressions!! Check it out.. you will Love it!! It's FREE.. Easy!! And FUN!! Sign up today and I'll see you there!! www.wordsthatlive.com Take care..

    NenaT

    09/30/2009

    So....ok! I am going to go there right now. Thanks for the tip! I'll let you know what I think, ok?

    Platti commented on The Romantics

    07-30-2009

    I am speechless, this has to be one of the best pieces I have read on this site, you definitely deserve applause for this *Starts clapping vigorously* is added to my faves ;) Keep writing...doing what you do best ;)

    NenaT

    08/01/2009

    Thank you (taking bows), I'm glad yoit is also one of my favorites.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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