The Rose Eternal


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One of my old ones from my vault of yesteryear, however it has taken on a new Blossom as I grow with my subtle soulmate! Thank you for sharing your time with me. . .

The Rose Eternal

The Rose Eternal

A Rose is a Rose no matter how hard the breeze blows

When the stem has ceased to grow and all the petals

have fallen

And its beauty is scattered with the wind

Then will it reform in heaven to be replaced on earth



Maybe not in the same soiled place, but always with

the exact subtle grace

Planting its gentleness in souls that will fade long

before the flower

Is it a wonder the rose is a metaphor of love in its

full array

For true love never dies, nor does a rose

They but take on a new blossom with the passing

of each ethereal day


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wamomo commented on The Rose Eternal


Beautifully done, soulwriter. I love that you brought the full life cycle and new birth of the flower into the piece as part of its eternal mother's name was Rose and she passed when I was young...this was a precious reminder that her beauty will remain forever immortalized both symbolically and in heart. :-)

stellar commented on The Rose Eternal


Love this,,,,same idea with my Aphrodite,,,.....but it is about eternal beauty because of cycle..its always my belief...eternity is cycle...not linear...



An oldie but goodie and still one of my simple favorites - you nailed it with your comments!

federallawman commented on The Rose Eternal


Have you ever picked a rose for a loved one and then returned back to the same bush later only to find out that 2 roses have grown in it's place. In all that gloom and despair that surrounds us in our world today we often forget about the true beauty that is always there. That is why we have poets their passion is to ensure that the true beauty of the world never be forgotten. You my friend are just that, a poet. Thank you for sharing.



Thank you for your insight and compliment.

gogant commented on The Rose Eternal


I have looked at roses bright and colorful--I've watched as they died and blew away--such as a love I had withered, but the memory will stay...



Many of us are blessed at least one time in our life to discover a beautiful rose, the test is in loving and nurturing it to keep it alive and blossoming. Thank you for your insightful comments.

Paige commented on The Rose Eternal


This poem is absolutely beautiful. Your words are strung together so nicely, beyond anything i could probably do.



No - never beyond what you can do, for what you do you do for yourself and then it is up to others to discover your art and to be blessed by it. Thank you for your kind words bestowed upon me!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

soulwriter’s Poems (53)

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Title Comments
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Within This Well Worn Box 2
A Writer's Amnesia 2
Contentment 2
Love Hurts 6
Sadistic Captivity 0
Within This Glass 2
A Boy Named Alice (I dream of white rabbits) 57
L I M B O 21
Beautiful Stranger 19
Symbolic Differences 17
Drowning in a Sea of Me 18
Without Fail 16
Oil Painting 12
Beneath the Tree 42
Pretty Bullets 32
Wishing Her Well 18
The Death of Life 22
Don’t Live Without Love 17
Never Ever After 14
Nature's Little Surprises 16
Love, Lust, and Lingering Sensations 13
My Haunting Heart 17
Weathering The Winds of Trust 12
Do That Again Please 21
Love's Coffin 48
It Hurts 31
In Every Living Space 14
Gargoyle (Girl) 27
Controlled 14
Your Love Is Poetry 25
Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me 13
Nothing Can Compare 8
Melancholy Cure 10
Our Daydream Dance 8
Vanishing 30
All That You Are 10
Words Worth 43
Black 37
The Toy 23
The Rose Eternal 28
Whisper From Behind the Mirror 38
Stormy Purification 13
Love Stains 19
The Tree Within 19
I Practice Moving Meditation... 12
The Gallows of Destructive Love 10
Love of the Soul 15
Crystal Iris 14
The Nature of Relationship 24