The Rose!

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The Rose!

 

Hallo, I am glad to know you are doing well

And to hear family fine.

I called you just to share my feeling

That I need you to know.

Can you guess now where I stand?

Yes, in my yard before the smiling rose!

I remember, the days in dungeons

Where you were alone stifling in tears.....

Heavy rainning with lightning and thunder..

I afraid the earth would sink in your tears!

How horrible the life, sometimes

Faith plays his role very pungent and cruel!

How much my heart did hurt for you

Though I am far and nobody to you.

Everyday I came in park with weaping eyes

To nurse the rose, but I forgot in pains.

The rose would fade in fall of tears,

I was afraid, it would dry and lose

And make me alone in the desert in close.

For its wealth and growth ever on earth

Stream of prayers came from heart.

How wonder the life, sometimes

Faith plays his role very clever in favour.

Days flew more with its black wings,

Spring came in gradual with hopes in hands.

Rose began to sprout ever than before,

And to spray fragrance with smile.

I feel ever the rose is you

Hope, you came back from darkness!

Hallo..., why keep silence? don’t hear me?

Oh, sorry... disconnected my cell!...

Excuse me if I hurt you again

Leading to the past for a while,

Excuse me for my call I never repeat!

 

 

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Niranjan commented on The Rose!

03-29-2010

The Rose brings back the original fragrance and beauty of it. never we lose result of the sincere love and prayer.Good!

BikemanRJ commented on The Rose!

03-27-2010

giving other joy in the beauty of a new formed flower a very thouching poem God Bless BikemanRJ Gave you a 10

BikemanRJ commented on The Rose!

03-27-2010

This is a very deep and heart felt poem you have show a lot of concern and care for others in this poem taking the reader from darkness into the light and be others

Bladleyking commented on The Rose!

03-26-2010

The Rose brings a life bacck! have fragrance and beauty always to yr writings too!

ApaqRasgirl commented on The Rose!

03-26-2010

I really liked this poem, it was really loveing. please have a look and the one I did called 'Love like a Rose. and the 'Thistle' both are of love like songs played in my ear for my love Johnny, whom i lost almost two years ago in a Motorcycle accident, but I still feel and hold our love dear and continue to write poems about how we felt and loved together. thank you for sharing this with me. love Asha

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kesavkavumthara’s Poems (8)

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