the sad reality

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    just a random poem i made when thinking of a lot of different things that happen in this world

    the sad reality

    And so another kingdom falls,
    what happened to the peaceful place,
    our world used to be,
    compared to what we now see.
    A scream,
    echoing in the darkness,
    without a single sound.
    the streets filled with,
    stalkers,
    rapists,
    and murderers,
    midnights blood hound.
    At the nights highest,
    our blood runs through the drains,
    like a sickly creek.
    what has become,
    of this once beautiful world?
    so corrupt,
    so vile,
    so evil,
    so dark,
    don't you think it's about time,
    someone kind left their mark?

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    Shelbylolann commented on the sad reality

    06-20-2012

    I love this Jacob!(: You are brilliant! Youre like... soooooo amazing! Haha Great write........ 10 here

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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